事实上,在高考的书面表达阅卷中,试卷的评阅是不轻易给0分的。只要考生写的是跟题目相关的词句,即使写出的句子语法结构单调,较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,甚至表达的信息零散破碎,如:I’m Li Hua. How are you?或ask me some questions等,也有1-2分。因此鼓励基础薄弱考生不要轻易交白卷,而是尽量用自己的语言试图传达给读者信息。只要完成了某个交际任务,即使半对半错,马马虎虎,也可以拿到相应的内容分数。因此,考生切忌抄袭与写作内容无关的语句,抄得再多,那也是徒劳。
3. 依序写作,要点明晰
题目中非常明确地要求回复邮件,内容包括:1. 到达时间;2.合适的礼物; 3. 餐桌礼仪。建议考生按照这三个要点的顺序行文。最好不要打乱顺序,一个要点一个段落,让各个要点一目了然,便于评卷老师找要点。如果打乱顺序,重新排序又没有很好地衔接,可能会被评卷老师漏看信息,导致失分。
4. 认真书写,整洁美观
书写的印象分非常重要。英语单词字迹潦草还连笔,就会让评卷者读起来非常费劲,可能降低得分。我们不苛求每位考生都能写出高颜值的书写,但最起码要保证卷面相对干净整洁,书写要工整可辨度高。避免因书写潦草,龙飞凤舞无法看清导致的非智力因素失分。
5. 运用较复杂结构和较高级词汇
对于基础较好的学生,要了解高分档的具体规定并尽自己最大努力去完成交际任务。第五档高分作文要求除了完全完成了试题规定的任务:覆盖了所有内容要点;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,全文结构紧凑,还需要应用较丰富的语法结构和词汇。请看以下这篇例文:
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinesefriend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. In addition, you’d better bring some fruit, for it is suitable for both old and young. Last but not least, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me. May you have a wonderful day with your friend.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
(1)精美词汇:pay a visit to拜访, put forward 提, be supposed to 应该
(2)出彩结构:Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.(分词短语中又含that引导的宾语从句)
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture.(that引导宾语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句)
In addition, you’d better bring some fruit, for it is suitable for both old and young. (运用了由for连接的表示原因或理由的并列分句)
Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to.(what引导表语从句)
Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice. (动名词短语作主语)
总之,要想书面表达得高分或满分,须做到:认真审题,切忌跑题;不留白卷,切忌抄袭;书写工整,词句高级。
责任编辑 蒋小青

